final critic and wrap up post

so the final critic was...certainly interesting. there was a lot of words and things floating around but two things of interest stood out to me. that they did like the concept art, by that I mean the art used in the concept stage of of development, motioning how it was strong and very well put together. and also that they didn't care for the story. There was also mention of not being able to read the text witch I can see for some frames but am really unsure of how to fix that. Over all, I think this went as well as it could have given the lack of midterms stuff I did so...yeah. In all honesty I should have really focused more and did more work as that is what really killed me most. I will say that I think that this set up worked the best for me as I mainly worked digital any way and having to take a flash drive and stuff wouldn't have worked nearly as well an I may have even had less work. However, I am satisfied with the answers I got. I'll definitely sleep on what they said and maybe come up with more ideas and things later.