Story board

So this is something that may or may not work as I don't have much in the way of ideas in term of a good story. not to say that it's bad but I have notes first off this is more or less the first draft here and is FAR from final. second there was too few panels and one or two more would be better in my opinion and finally I think that this should work if i keep it simple and not be worried about the actual joke landing rather the lead up to it could be better. also not final design just wanted to get the general concept down in order to just get a talking point.

also hand writing is not the best should be worked on.